I reviewed Kathy and Heather Morris.
I learned from reading other's drafts that I need to make sure I work on sentence clarity. It is important to make sure I don't assume my readers know anything, and that I explain it all. I also might have used a few too many 'he/shes' and not enough off pronouns..I will need to work on that.
Kathy and Stephann reviewed my draft. I am not really surprised by any comments, I had some misspellings of words that were corrected, and also a sentence that was really confusing! Some of my diction was corrected with adjectives that might fit a little better which is always helpful, so my material does not sound so redundant or boring to read.
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