D12, HW4, Style in Argument

Section1

I think word choice was very critical in in my 3rd paragraph, which talks about IC3 and all of the statistics they had on identity theft. It is very crucial because I often find that when quoting numbers like that, it feels hard to not commit some sort of plagiarism by accident. So, I find this one of the most creative times because you really have to be careful.

Section 2

This will have to relate back to Section 1. Plagiarism can happen very easily even when trying to give credit to the original source. With statistics, it always seems like there is not many ways to approach it, so you have to make sure word choice and sentence structure are both properly in place.

Section 3

In the paragraph that talks about LifeLock, I have a list going on and I used a colon right before the list. I did this to make it more noticeable it is a list and also to be hopefully be more effective because it is almost like a check list.